Thanks for uploading to your blog. I would say you need to work on the following:
Cover - the pictures. Look back at other magazines we have analysed and consider what their pictures look like. There is normally one main picture so choose your best one and make it the predominant picture.
Contents page - there is too much white space. You need to include more articles, more details about each article and more pictures.
Double page spread - include an introduction and a conclusion to your interview and include more writing as there is far too much white space.
Hannah - you are going to have to work extremely hard to improve your magazine before the deadline on Feb 25th.
Hi Hannah,
ReplyDeleteThanks for uploading to your blog. I would say you need to work on the following:
Cover - the pictures. Look back at other magazines we have analysed and consider what their pictures look like. There is normally one main picture so choose your best one and make it the predominant picture.
Contents page - there is too much white space. You need to include more articles, more details about each article and more pictures.
Double page spread - include an introduction and a conclusion to your interview and include more writing as there is far too much white space.
Hannah - you are going to have to work extremely hard to improve your magazine before the deadline on Feb 25th.
Mrs Hill